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It's good to sing. by ~KingLEMUR:iconKingLEMUR:



Its good to sing when no one can hear.
How my happiness flies like the wind.

How my voice echoes soft and so crystal clear.
And the sound rebounds in the recoil.

Its good to sing when no one can hear.
My life shines thru, even in night.

How my voice carries the soul to a higher off place.
And a guitar strum penetrates the melody.

Its good to sing when no one can hear.
A happy tune sung all to myself.

Its mine alone, and no one can adhere.
To this beat that hits, only to mine ears.

Its good to sing when no one can hear.
My breath takes the notes and creates a song.

How happy it sounds and how dear.
It plays for me in my sleep, and in dreams.

Its good to sing when no one can hear.
No one to record of my tidings.

How my emotions turn pure gold, how my life turns into diamond.
How the sadness has faded and gone away.

Its good to sing when no one can hear…

No one to hear me, when im at my best, and so crystal clear…
©2006-2009 ~KingLEMUR
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Short poem i devised as the result of a concept where people start to sing when they are afraid, or when they are alone.

Mabe humans do have a natural ability at melody.
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T_Tb... embarrasment/fear is a funny thing;dont be scared;dont be afraid--nice poem.

"No one to hear me, when im at my best, and so crystal clear…"

T3Tb

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O_o...?
Thanks very much ^_^

This poem just proves that all my poems have a sad undertone to them, well, except for the really straight forward ones.

Hypocritical aint it?

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So i asked myself--what am i to do?--and i said...nothing.
ooh nice poem. i like the repetition.

reminds me of a that song by straylight run
"Sing like you think no one's listening"
Thank you muchly~

Now that you mention it, it does sound like that song. Haha.

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So i asked myself--what am i to do?--and i said...nothing.
Glory always has the best ideas. It could most definately be a song for Paper Cutout People--it should! I would only change, "ears" to its singular. I was going to change something else, but then it makes perfect sense...

I've read most of the other poems and this was the first [today] of which I had something other than, "awesome," "amazing," or, "beautiful" to say. GOOD JOB! Perhaps I will post just to say, "Hi," and, "This one's my favorite." They all are.

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Resting, waiting, biding, demon is locked up, nearby; all keys outside, around, just out of reach; seething out, the bars, the cage, the bondage, shackled to the back; at the very back, the dark, deserted corner; never seen, never thought, never heard: it
i like it :]

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Hehe, thank you very much. ^_^

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So i asked myself--what am i to do?--and i said...nothing.
mhmm

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